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Why it looks off

Alena spent five years and hundreds of client projects learning why a design looks off, and how to fix it. Here’s a free piece of it.

About five minutes: three color checks, two fall palettes and one real design fix from the full version, which opens October 9 at noon ET.About five minutes: three color checks, two fall palettes and one real design fix from the full version.

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After

Same coral. Three checks fixed it. Here’s how.

Three checks that tell you if a color combo works.

Back to the coral at the top. Before, the teal fights it and the gray adds nothing. After, it sits between a dark and a light. Three things changed, and each one is a check you can run on any combo.

  1. One loud, two quiet.

    Only one color gets to be bright. Two bright colors don’t make a piece brighter, they cancel each other out.

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  2. One dark, one middle, one light.

    Squint until the shapes blur. If two colors melt together, they’re the same lightness, and one has to go lighter or darker.

    Tip: Designers call this value, how light or dark a color is.

    Before, in black and white: the coral and the gray melt together.
    After. A dark, a middle and a light.
  3. The loud color takes up the least space.

    When the loud color stops feeling special, there’s usually just too much of it.

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That’s one lesson. The full version has all of them.

Why It Looks Off has every lesson like this one, sorted by the problem you’re stuck on. It’s $39 until it opens October 9 at noon ET, then $69.Why It Looks Off has every lesson like this one, sorted by the problem you’re stuck on.

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Two fall palettes

The Ginkgo

Check one: one loud, two quiet

The move: The green is dialed down on purpose: it’s the only reason the red reads as hot. If the loud color isn’t popping, it’s usually the background.

Use it when: Your design has one focal point, like a big illustration or a headline, and everything else stays quiet.

An autumn poster: a red ginkgo leaf on muted green, with AUTUMN set in tall cream capitals down the right.

Cool Fall Breeze

The exception: when two colors sit close

The move: Squint and the background and the pear almost blend, on purpose. Check two would flag it, but the plum is much darker than both: two colors can sit close if a third is much darker.

Use it when: You want a calm design with no bright colors, and your text or logo can go much darker.

A ‘Cool Fall Breeze’ event poster: a pale blue pear on pale cream, with the title and line-up in dark plum.

You just used three design principles.

One loud, two quiet
Saturation and emphasis
One dark, one middle, one light
Value and contrast
The loud color takes up the least space
The 60-30-10 rule

You knew all three before you knew their names. The names are how you explain your choices to a client.

That’s color. More often it’s everything around it: fonts, spacing, where your eye goes first. That’s what the full version covers.

See what’s off. Know exactly how to fix it.

  1. Starting out

    $25

    design projects

  2. Two years later

    $10K

    months

  3. Today

    Daily

    requests for design work

Why It Looks Off is everything I learned about why a design feels wrong, written down so you can use it in your own work.

Over 5 years and 100+ projects, I spent a lot of late nights (and grew a few white hairs) staring at designs I knew looked off. I’d change the font. Still off. Resize everything. Still off. Eventually I noticed it was the same couple of small things every time.

So I wrote them all down and sorted them by the problem you’re stuck on so you can go straight to an answer instead of learning it the slow way like I did.

Alena

Your results depend on your own work. This gives you the lessons that got me here.

Who it’s for

  • You design for clients

    Know why your work looks good, and be able to explain it. That’s what clients pay more for.

  • You run a business

    Branding and marketing that looks like you hired someone.

  • You’re just starting

    Skip the years of guessing.

It opens October 9 at noon ET.It’s out now.

Every part of it works like this page: the problem named in plain words, then exactly what to change.

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Early bird price: $39 USD until October 9 at noon ET, then $69. Alena emails you your access the day it opens.$69 USD. Alena emails you your access.

Three early bird buyers get Alena’s eye on their own design.

Buy before it opens and send in one design you’re stuck on by then. Right after checkout you’ll see where. On launch day Alena picks three and goes through each one in writing, start to finish, the way she does her own client work.

Design audits aren’t offered as a service, so this is the only way to get one.

Preorder the full versionGet the full version

Early bird price: $39 USD until October 9 at noon ET, then $69. Alena emails you your access the day it opens.$69 USD. Alena emails you your access.

One design edit from the full version

“It looks homemade and I can’t say why.”

Before

  1. Eight fonts on one poster. One for the headline, a handwritten “of art”, and one for each of the six labels.

  2. The labels don’t sit in the same place. Four are at the top of their card, two slid to the bottom.

  3. The cards don’t match. Rounded corners, square corners, and one card with an outline none of the others have.

After

  1. One font. The headline, then all six labels in it at one thickness and one size, because they do the same job.

  2. Every label bar back to the top. Same spot on every card.

  3. Every card the same. Same corners, same height, lined up in even rows.

Nothing was redrawn. Each problem is a small decision that isn’t wrong by itself, which is why it’s so hard to name. Together they break one rule, the law of similarity: things that do the same job should look the same.

Everything Alena teaches on Instagram, written down and sorted.

Here for the color combos?

You saved the palette. Here are the hex codes, and which color goes where.

Find them by the color you’re stuck with or what you’re making, with the black and white check already run.

  • ‘Flower Market’ poster: brown capitals over pink grasses and a pressed flower on blush paper.
  • A tinned-fish label reading ‘Yummy Anchovy’: pale yellow with blue stripes and a line-drawn fish, on a dark brown ground.
  • ‘Fresh’ poster: a red apple on pale blue.
  • ‘Wild Grace’ poster: olive-green letters tumbling across cream paper, over a photo of hands holding dried flowers.
  • ‘Coffee people city’ cards: a navy card and a cream card with a line-drawn coffee cup, on dark brown.
  • ‘Rude Olive’ poster in navy and burgundy on cream.

Here for the design combos?

The reel is fifteen seconds. Here it’s every step, written out.

In simple language, for whatever you design in, plus how Alena came up with the idea so you can start coming up with your own.

  • An x-ray of a tulip on black with a green square and typewriter labels: ‘Specimen 0427, tulip, structure of petals’.

    Flowers + x-ray

  • ‘Ears away’ in brown script with a leaping hare, over a pale blue lace doily.

    Lace + script

  • A peach wearing two produce stickers: ‘Sun Grown Club’ and ‘So Juicy’.

    Stickers + fruit

  • Soft watercolor blots in blue, green and pink under a loose black line drawing of flowers, labeled ‘flower scribble’.

    Watercolor + scribble

  • The word ‘bloom’ in white cross stitch floating over a meadow of wildflowers.

    Cross stitch + type

  • ‘Good things take time’ in heavy black capitals, with a bouclé chair and a low wooden table set into the lines.

    Text + images

Here for the design edits?

You can tell yours looks off. This tells you which one it is, and what to change.

Start from how it feels, and a few yes or no checks point you at your fix.

  • It looks boring.
  • It doesn’t stand out.
  • It feels plain.
  • There’s no focal point.
  • It looks chaotic.
  • It looks busy.
  • It looks homemade.
  • You don’t know where to look.
  • It doesn’t pop.
  • It looks like a template.
  • It looks washed out.
  • It’s too simple.

Before

Before: a tomato poster with a large vine of red tomatoes and a small ‘TOMATO’ label.

After

After: the same tomatoes, with ‘TO MA TO’ set large and stacked beside them.

Before

Before: an exhibition poster for Elisa Bakker with a small condensed headline over a photo of black shoes on a tray.

After

After: the same poster with ‘Elisa Bakker’ set huge, running behind the photo.

Stop guessing why it looks off.

Preorder the full versionGet the full version

$39 until October 9 at noon ET, then $69, rising as the library grows. Every new breakdown from Instagram gets added.$69 USD, rising as the library grows. Every new breakdown from Instagram gets added.

Not what you hoped for? You have 14 days from the day it opens. Email orders@asongstudio.com and Alena will refund you, unless you’ve already received your early-bird audit.Not what you hoped for? You have 14 days from the day you buy. Email orders@asongstudio.com and Alena will refund you.