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Why it looks off

When a design looks off, it usually comes down to a few simple rules, and you can check every one of them yourself. On this page: three checks for your color combos, two fall palettes (hex codes included) that show the checks working, and one design edit broken down step by step.

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After

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Three checks that tell you if a color combo works.

An example first. The same coral, with two different sets of colors around it.

Before

The teal and the coral are both shouting, so they compete for your attention. The gray isn't adding anything or complementing either color.

After

The coral didn't change. The teal went dark and the gray went light. Now there's one bright color sitting between a dark and a light.

Three things changed, and each one is a check you can run on any combo.

  1. One loud, two quiet.

    Only one color gets to be bright. The other two are there to complement it. Two bright colors don't make a piece brighter, they cancel each other out.

    Quiet
    Loud
    Quiet
  2. One dark, one middle, one light.

    Squint at your colors until the shapes blur. If two of them melt together, they're the same lightness, and one has to go lighter or darker.

    Your eye reads light and dark before it reads color, which is why designers check their work in black and white.

    Tip: Designers call this value, how light or dark a color is.

    Before, in black and white: the coral and the gray melt together.
    After. A dark, a middle and a light.
  3. The loud color takes up the least space.

    Roughly 60% background, 30% second color, 10% loud color. When the loud one stops feeling special, there's usually just too much of it.

    • 60% background
    • 30% second
    • 10% loud

That's the whole check. In the full version, every palette from the color combos series has already been run through it.

Here's what these checks look like in action, on real designs.

Two fall palettes

Hex codes on every color, and each palette shows the checks at work in a different way.

The Ginkgo

Check one, one loud two quiet

The move: The green is dialed down on purpose. That's the only reason the red reads as hot. When the loud color isn't popping, the thing to fix is usually the background.

Use it when: Your design has one strong focal point, like a big illustration or a headline, and everything else should stay quiet around it.

An autumn poster: a red ginkgo leaf on muted green, with AUTUMN set in tall cream capitals down the right.

Cool Fall Breeze

The exception, when two colors sit close

The move: Squint at this and the background and the pear almost blend together, and that's on purpose. Check two would normally tell you to fix it. It works here because the plum is much darker than both of them. Two colors can sit close as long as a third one is much darker.

Use it when: You want a calm design with no bright colors, and you have text or a logo that can go much darker than the rest.

A ‘Cool Fall Breeze’ event poster: a pale blue pear on pale cream, with the title and line-up in dark plum.

Design has rules and principles. You just used three of them.

One loud, two quiet
Saturation and emphasis
One dark, one middle, one light
Value and contrast
The loud color takes up the least space
The 60-30-10 rule

You understood all three before you knew the fancy words for them. The full explanation of each one, and why it works, is in the digital product. See what's in it

That's color. Most of the time, though, the colors are fine and it's everything around them.

The same kind of check works there too. Here's one design edit, broken down all the way.

One design edit, broken down

“It looks homemade and I can't say why.”

Before

After

  1. Eight fonts on one poster. The headline is one, and “of art” is a handwritten second. Then the six labels are six more: a chunky one, a bookish one, a curly one, a typewriter, a stencil and another bookish one.

    One font. The headline, and then all six labels in that same font, same thickness, same size, because all six labels do the same job.

  2. The labels don't sit in the same place. Four are at the top of their card, two slid to the bottom.

    Every label bar back to the top. Same spot on every card.

  3. The cards don't match. Some corners are rounded, some are square, and one card has an outline that none of the others have.

    Every card the same. Same corners, same height, lined up in even rows.

Nothing was redrawn. The shapes, the colors and the layout are identical in both. Each of those three things was a small decision made on its own, and none of them is wrong by itself. That's why it's so hard to name.

Things that do the same job should look the same. Titles with titles, labels with labels, cards with cards. When they stay visually consistent, the reader knows what goes together and doesn't get confused.

Designers call this the law of similarity, and it's what the poster was breaking: six labels doing one job, set six different ways, so none of them read as a group.

If this page helped, everything above is one small piece of the full thing.

Two palettes out of the whole color library. One design edit out of all of them. Same depth, a lot more of it, and sorted so you can find the one that matches what you're stuck on right now.

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All three series, written down and sorted, so you can look things up.

Here for the color combos?

Every palette from the videos, with the Pantone and hex codes, all organized for you.

Start from the color you're stuck with, or from what you're making, and get the palettes built around it. Each one shows which color does which job, so you know where every color goes, with the black and white check already run.

  • Purple
  • Green
  • Yellow
  • Red
  • Blue
  • Pink
  • Brown
  • Neutrals
  • ‘Flower Market’ poster: brown capitals over pink grasses and a pressed flower on blush paper.
  • A tinned-fish label reading ‘Yummy Anchovy’: pale yellow with blue stripes and a line-drawn fish, on a dark brown ground.
  • ‘Wild Grace’ poster: olive-green letters tumbling across cream paper, over a photo of hands holding dried flowers.
  • ‘Coffee people city’ cards: a navy card and a cream card with a line-drawn coffee cup, on dark brown.
  • ‘Fresh’ poster: a red apple on pale blue.
  • ‘Rude Olive’ poster in navy and burgundy on cream.

Here for the design combos?

The step by step tutorials, written out with what elements you need and what effects you need.

A reel has fifteen seconds. Here every combo is written out in simple language, in order, at your own speed. Plus how the idea came together, so you can start coming up with your own.

  • An x-ray of a tulip on black with a green square and typewriter labels: ‘Specimen 0427, tulip, structure of petals’.

    Flowers + x-ray

  • Soft watercolor blots in blue, green and pink under a loose black line drawing of flowers, labelled ‘flower scribble’.

    Watercolor + scribble

  • The word ‘bloom’ in white cross stitch floating over a meadow of wildflowers.

    Cross stitch + type

  • ‘Good things take time’ in heavy black capitals, with a bouclé chair and a low wooden table set into the lines.

    Text + images

  • ‘Ears away’ in brown script with a leaping hare, over a pale blue lace doily.

    Lace + script

  • A peach wearing two produce stickers: ‘Sun Grown Club’ and ‘So Juicy’.

    Stickers + fruit

Written so the steps work in whatever you design in.

Here for the design edits?

Every design edit, sorted by symptom and feeling.

Start from how it feels. A few yes or no checks on your own design point you at your fix, and every fix is broken down exactly like the one above.

  • It looks boring.
  • It doesn't stand out.
  • It feels plain.
  • There's no focal point.
  • It looks chaotic.
  • It looks busy.
  • It looks homemade.
  • You don't know where to look.
  • It doesn't pop.
  • It looks like a template.
  • It looks washed out.
  • It's too simple.

Before

Before: a tomato poster with a large vine of red tomatoes and a small ‘TOMATO’ label.

After

After: the same tomatoes, with ‘TO MA TO’ set large and stacked beside them.

Before

Before: an exhibition poster for Elisa Bakker with a small condensed headline over a photo of black shoes on a tray.

After

After: the same poster with ‘Elisa Bakker’ set huge, running behind the photo.

What you get

  • Every palette from the color combos series, with the Pantone and hex codes, sorted so you can start from the color you're stuck with or from what you're making.
  • Every design combo written out step by step, with what you need and what to do, instead of fifteen seconds of reel.
  • Every design edit, sorted by symptom, each one broken down exactly like the one on this page.
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